Robert Pimm How to get a book published

How to get published: introducing my Istanbul thriller PALLADIUM

Robert Pimm
Robert Pimm

How to get published: my Istanbul thriller PALLADIUM is a white-knuckle ride to save a city from destruction

In 2011 I visited Istanbul. At the time I was living and working in Kyiv, Ukraine, and writing my thriller “A Killing in Sevastopol”.

When I arrived in Istanbul its beauty and history struck me. I thought: I must write a thriller set here.

Leigh Turner Istanbul
Eating a simit in Istanbul, 2015. PALLADIUM was well under way

I moved to Istanbul in 2012. I wrote in the evenings and at weekends. My first notes for the book that was to become PALLADIUM date from that year.

What, I thought, if an archaeologist racing to excavate a site ahead of the construction of a new skyscraper dug up an ancient relic that played into contemporary fears? Could I flash back to historic events? What if people believed the relic protected the city from harm? What catastrophe might threaten?

With the help of friends in Istanbul, I came up with a terrific idea for a cataclysmic threat.

‘Wait!’ I hear you cry. ‘You want to tell us how to get published, but you have been writing PALLADIUM for nine years?’

Dear readers: writing and revising a novel can take any amount of time.

How to get published: a timeline

  • 2011: inspiration strikes on a visit to Istanbul.
Who can fail to be inspired by the ancient sites of Istanbul?
  • 2012: I move to Istanbul and start researching and writing the novel. I explore the city and bookmark websites such as (no spoilers) “Palladium: classical antiquity”; “Byzantine Constantinople”; “Hellenism: religion”; “US Aircraft Carriers”; “US archaeology student found dead in Turkey”; and “Building frenzy devours Turkish archaeological legacy”.
  • 2013: the Gezi Park protests explode in Istanbul. Disturbances, and tear-gas, engulf the area I live, making my life particularly busy and slowing my writing efforts.
Gezi Park protests
Gezi Park protests, 2013
  • 2014: a first version of the novel, entitled “Istanbul Rising”, is complete.
  • 2015: I submit “Istanbul Rising” to around 20 agents and publishers, without success. As any of you authors out there know who have tried it, this is a dispiriting business when unsuccessful. I devote my efforts to a new comedy thriller.
  • 2016-17. “Istanbul Rising” slumbers.
  • 2018: I attend an Arvon writing course, “Editing Fiction: Turning First Drafts into Publishable Books” (click on link for a review of the course). We are asked to bring a manuscript. Because my new novel is not yet ready, I take “Istanbul Rising”. The 16 participants all have a chance to present, and discuss, their drafts. I get some valuable feedback from the tutors and other participants (thanks, everyone!) and make lifelong friends. In a vote, participants say PALLADIUM is the best title.

PALLADIUM – a TV series?

  • 2018: a TV producer says that PALLADIUM would make a brilliant TV series. But it would be easier to sell, she says, if it were already published as a book.
  • 2018: I publish my Berlin thriller, BLOOD SUMMIT.
  • 2019: I send a revised draft of PALLADIUM to ten “first readers”, who provide invaluable feedback (again, thanks, everyone). A friends from the Hurst gives me a copy of Will Storr’s, “The Science of Storytelling“, with its concept of “the sacred flaw”. I find both comments and book excellent and try to apply the lessons I learn to my next redraft.
  • 2020: I send a new, improved version of the novel to 14 agents. Most do not reply. But honourable exceptions include Darley Anderson, one of the most famous agents on earth, who finds time to give me some useful feedback. I revise and polish the manuscript further.
  • 3 September 2020: a friend tells me about #pitmad, an event held four times a year on Twitter where authors can pitch their novels direct to potential agents or publishers (details at the link). I try it for two of my books. Staci Olson, an acquisition editor for “Immortal Works”, a US publisher, contacts me and asks to see the first five pages of PALLADIUM.

“Can I see the full manuscript?”

  • 24 October: Staci comes back to me and asks to see the full manuscript.
  • 10 February 2021: Staci expresses enthusiasm for PALLADIUM and holds out the prospect of a contract, but not guaranteed. She asks for some initial edits focused on the use of the passive voice, with some excellent examples from the text. The quality of these suggestions encourages me to feel I am dealing with a top editorial team.
  • 27 February: I send Immortal Works a revised version of PALLADIUM, in which I have made the changes suggested.
Robert Pimm how to get a book published
Signing the contract for PALLADIUM
  • 29 April 2021: I sign a contract with Immortal Works to publish PALLADIUM. The same day, IW Chief Editor Holli Anderson sends me a handsome welcome letter noting “it’s never too early to start promoting your book” and suggesting I use my social media channels to document my author journey. This strikes me as great advice.
  • The welcome letter also sets out an editorial timeline, of which the first step is a further round of self edits, based on detailed guidelines around tense, point of view, adverbs, characters, echoes, cliches etc. Again this attention to detail strikes me as reassuring and professional. I have already started the self-editing exercise and will be working on it [deletes adverb: intensely] in the coming weeks. Wish me luck! And thanks to the team at Immortal Works for your belief in PALLADIUM!

I will post here further as my author journey continues. Watch this space.

P.S. If you would like to have a look at my other writing, my most recent books are: my blackly comic Seven Hotel Stories and Corona Crime – a thriller for a world in the grip of coronavirus.

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8 Responses

  1. Dearest Patron,
    Tebrik ederim. You deserve the best.
    I am so honoured and proud to have worked for you.

    Congratulations again, and please remember me for a part in the tv series :))

    It’s going to be fantastic.

    Saygilarimla
    Yasemin Baser

    1. Dear Yasemin

      So lovely to hear from you! You would be perfect as Elif, the beautiful, sassy, tough archaeology professor! I will mention it to the producers when the time comes.

      Thanks for being in touch and Let us stay in touch. The pleasure of our work together was all mine!

      Leigh

  2. Hi Leigh

    Am absolutely thrilled for you that at long last your thriller-writing talent has been acknowledged!
    It’s such super news. Do hope all goes well on the edits and that it won’t be too long before we see
    PALLADIUM on the shelves!
    Warmest wishes
    Denise (AKA Molly Green!)

    1. Dear Denise – thanks so much! Coming from a top-selling author such as yourself that is mightily encouraging. I think the process will take the best part of a year, but let’s see. Can’t wait.

      Leigh

  3. Congratulations!
    Definitely want to dive into Palladium as soon as it’s available. And watch the ensuing series. The setting of Istanbul alone draws me to it – one of the most fascinating, beautiful, and atmospheric of cities. Good luck with the edits.
    Jane

    1. Hi Jane,

      Isn’t Istanbul wonderful? A king amongst cities. Perfect setting for a breakneck thriller if you ask me. Will post here as things move forward.

      Leigh

    1. Dear Dylan, Thanks so much for these kind words. I am hoping it will be a terrific book – let’s see. Website still working nicely… Leigh

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